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Good Morning, Ma'am

Eggs Benedict warmed beneath a silver dome;
Fresh-squeezed juice in a crystal glass;
Crisp, white linen spread upon the cart;
A ‘good morning, ma’am’ -- this is first class.

Ah, room service.  Would that it could be
My daily fare; with a touch of the phone pad,
A cheerful voice asking, ‘May I take your order?’
To hear this each day would make me so glad.

To lay back on a soft, plush pillow,
To savor a French croissant,
To linger over my espresso --
There is nothing else I want.

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  1. Date: 1/29/2011 4:39:00 PM
    Man, how did I ever miss this one. I thought for sure I'd seen the winners list for these and I see congratulations here. Anyway, WAY to GO. I saw you winning contests recently and thought i'd check out more of your work. I can see why you are a winner. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 4:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this fine work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 9:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Good Morning" Contest, with this delightful Rhyme which I really enjoyed reading...That was a good morning! : ) Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 9:26:00 AM
    Congratulations Deb on your win in Francine's contest. My kinda room service. Have a lovely weekend....:)

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 5:38:00 AM
    Hi Deb - Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 3:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Deb in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 10:25:00 PM
    soft feel to this morning piece.. CONGRATS, deb for thebalstung ein.. :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 8:40:00 PM
    sounded just perfect to me , congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest Deb

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 4:52:00 PM all is just heavenly wonder a winner!!! Congratulations !!

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 3:54:00 PM
    Every one needs to be spoiled at times. I could use some of that. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 3:29:00 PM
    So thats what first class is Congrats on your win with this luxuriant write. BG

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 3:24:00 PM
    This really does sound like the perfect morning, Deb. Congratulations on your big win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 2:57:00 PM
    Congrats Deb on your big win in the Good Morning contest with this excellent entry my friend... enjoy another great top spot with luv.. so well deserved ...

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 6:49:00 AM
    Nice expressions on the Good morning, deb

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 5:39:00 PM
    Are you describing a morning at a hotel here? It surely appears as if you are. You are describing everything pervasively well. Good one Deb.

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 4:23:00 PM
    This is delight to read; makes me hungry for breakfast, Deb..even though it's early evening. lol Best of luck in Francine's contest! Always, Annalise aka Audrey

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 4:16:00 PM
    Lovely write Deb and a grand entry into the contest for Francine.. wonderful images of morning things that stir the soul to awakening..luv.. good luck..

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 3:50:00 PM
    Is there room enough for two?? Sounds heavenly !!! :)