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Good Girl

Trying to be good
But you are so good looking
Good girl turns naughty

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 1/20/2014 7:38:00 AM
    Smiling again.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 1/20/2014 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Safest just to post a smile! :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:39:00 AM
    this is a really cool senryu. Wish I'd written it!!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What an honor it is for me for you to think that, my dear! WOW! Hugs!
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:38:00 PM
    But does he have that inner beauty, or are you even bothered lol. Take care, Richard

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 5:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hmmmmmm....a good question, Mr Seal. I must say, I am partial to good looks. Good looks are an asset, a God given gift. Even in the Bible, good looks are often mentioned...David...was good looking, the first King of Israel, Saul, was good looking and a head and shoulder above the rest. Yes, I know it is being superficial...but that's me! I appreciate beauty.
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 12:58:00 PM
    how you tease me, eileen.... cuteness!.. love the mood of this piece; swell job!..:) huggs

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/21/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes....I do like to tease! ;) How well you know me, Nette. Hugs
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 11:15:00 AM
    Ha ha ha, last line is very naughty. Beautifully penned in haiku, my friend. Loved always, bl

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/21/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Naughty, but nice??? :) Thanks, BL...Always a pleasure!
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Ha ha, this makes me smile.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/21/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) :) :) :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 9:25:00 AM
    Nice! Visual stimulation to water the roots of our loins. ;-) Break down that wall of hesitated want.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/21/2013 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Drake.....that was quite a statement! You must promise to write a poem on that imperative sentence...Break down that wall of hestated want....Absolutely fantastic!
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 9:24:00 AM
    You is my kind of girl Miss Boop! Are you doing anything tonight??? Kenny xoxox

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/21/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh Kenny......You planning on flying over??? ;) Fly over...then we can talk about it! HA HA! You are such a tease!