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Good Bye My Love

Good Bye My Love it has been three months now they tell me it's time to say good bye i miss you everyday that comes and i look to the skies and sigh i wonder why you had to go i feel it was too soon that day you left me it was four hours past noon my whole world changed that day my heart you took with you that something special we always had especially the way you called me Boo but never do you leave my memories or my heart and mind for the past i need now to leave behind so i say Good Bye my love forever you will be mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/19/2010 7:41:00 PM
A SWEET WRITE, VERY ENJOYABLE
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Date: 5/19/2010 10:36:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Sheila. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 10:22:00 AM
I really like it but in the second to last line i think if you take out the now it would flow better since you already said now in the line before it. Just a suggestion :) I hope you keep writing your lovely poetry.
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