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Gone Are the Winds But Long Live the Words

~ Heavy in the wind, was sound of a phrase- Rhett Butler's curse word ~ blew open the door to eminent change ~ The dialogue withstood critics who could not keep that door bolted ~ A strong wind ~ ~ swept away ~ old values Filth caved in the door ~ ~ ____________________________________________________ For Judy Kono's Contest: "Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn" 8/29/13

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Date: 9/12/2013 12:38:00 AM
Congrats on winning the first place, Carrie
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Date: 9/9/2013 9:43:00 PM
Well done Carrie, it even looks cool. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/9/2013 8:48:00 PM
nice Carrie.......SKAT
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Date: 9/9/2013 6:46:00 PM
another nice lovely win Carrie...xox..Linda
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Date: 9/9/2013 6:22:00 PM
Great one Carrie. congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 9/9/2013 5:39:00 PM
Awesome poem Carrie....congratulations
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Date: 9/9/2013 3:14:00 PM
Thank You for entering my contest
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Date: 8/30/2013 10:19:00 AM
You chose a splendid form to do this challenge. LOVE it.
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Date: 8/30/2013 9:48:00 AM
excellent write, as always, Carrie. I must be the only person in the world who's never seen that film, lol, but even I know that quote : )
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Date: 8/30/2013 9:03:00 AM
I LOVE what you did with "~"...awesome! It made your words pop.
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Date: 8/30/2013 1:09:00 AM
Cleverly penned Carrie.
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:37:00 PM
Very interesting for expressing the damn things
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:25:00 PM
I like this, Carrie! Love your play on words (wind). Going in my favs! Love, KIm
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