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Golden Sunrise

I’m sorry for the way you are makes me feel like I’ve gone too far and now your love as turn to hate I now a victim of our fate. It wasn’t planned this life this hour yet the shadows cast bleak and dour a Golden sunrise oh so brief fuels again a life of grief. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/30/2020 6:37:00 PM

G'day Harry … most of us do have golden sunrises; some last for a lifetime; some only last for a short time. Vert good again Harry - Lindsay

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2012 5:38:00 AM

I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Harry. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/25/2012 3:12:00 AM

very nice write Harry ;}

Ralph Mason

Date: 9/19/2012 2:36:00 PM

very strong emotions flowing. great write! warm thoughts, Ralph

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/19/2012 7:50:00 AM

In such situation, victim of fate is wonderful words. Really nice poem of tragedy with aspiration. Destruction paves the way of construction. Thanks for your comments on my write my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2012 7:11:00 AM

Day bringing the sorrow again. What a lovely way to depict it, Harry. I was glad to see you had two new poems up today. (check line three I think some typos there. I had forgotten the "R" in my last poem's word Streaks and had written: violet steaks in the sky. haha

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/18/2012 7:23:00 PM

Good descriptive wording and rhyming. The title to this write looks like a good name for a diner.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2012 3:49:00 PM

HOLA! WOW... YOUR POEM IS COMES WITH A SLIGHTLY TWISTED IMAGE... All the sun means to me is TIMES... always a pleasure stopping by... xox~pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2012 3:25:00 PM

DEEP EMOTION EXUDES FROM WITHIN HARRY LUV .. AT TIMES WE DO SEAL OUR OWN FATE WITH HATE RATHER THAN LOVE .. I VOTE FOR LOVE ALWAYS MY FRIEND .. GUESS THAT MAKES ME A "SWEETHEART"..

Harry Horsman
Date: 9/18/2012 3:35:00 PM

i guess it does sweetheart

Kash Poet

Date: 9/18/2012 2:05:00 PM

Very nice harry!Love the ending very much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2012 1:39:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one even though it has a sad overtone to it..Very expressive and emotive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/18/2012 7:40:00 AM

I don't know how anyone's love could turn to hate against you harry boy, you will always be in my heart at any rate.. superb write xx

Harry Horsman
Date: 9/18/2012 3:36:00 PM

and in mine, thanks for your lovely comment!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/18/2012 6:39:00 AM

This is a brilliant, simply brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fine poem this morning! What a powerfully sad write Harry, but extremely effective poem! This is a wonderful piece, Great Work!!

Paloma Walker

Date: 9/18/2012 5:28:00 AM

Sad, and beautiful. So much of life isn't planned for sure..

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/18/2012 4:58:00 AM

Simply wonderful Harry! Terry (though sad)