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Gold Locket

Blue bells engraved on gold locket against my breast reminder of love when time carelessly spent in lying on the meadow green

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James Fraser

Date: 4/12/2011 11:25:00 AM

Many congratulation's Tahera on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles

John Freeman

Date: 3/23/2011 8:30:00 PM

Great to see you in the top 7. Tahera, with this worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/23/2011 1:46:00 PM

ah youth! I can smell the grass& see a lovers picture framed. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 8:50:00 AM

This is definitely one of the best entries, Tahera. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/23/2011 6:26:00 AM

Wonderful Tanka!Congrats Tahera on your well deserved win--kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Tahera in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2011 10:25:00 PM

wow, here is one I also missed somehow. You did very well making it a beautiful poem, Tahera. Congratulations. (I see it is not about those cute blue wrapped chocolates!)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/22/2011 9:13:00 PM

Painting a pretty picture here, Tahera, so relaxing reading this. awesome. Congrats. Harry

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/22/2011 7:01:00 PM

Tahera, Blue bells, lockets, love, time, meadows-perfect ingredients in this winning poem. Classy poem, my friend. Gwendolen

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/22/2011 4:30:00 PM

lovely Tahera, congrats on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2011 12:30:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your super win in the blue and gold contest my friend.. awesome words depicting the colors so well.. enjoy another sweet success and top ten victory with luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/22/2011 10:23:00 AM

Dear Tahera, this is not only beautiful but romantic also! A real treat to read. Congratulations on an awesome, and deserving win in Rick's "Gold and Blue" Contest! Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2011 10:18:00 AM

Very romantic work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara

Duncan Chappell

Date: 3/4/2011 1:14:00 AM

love it so much my dear friend

Christopher Marcum

Date: 3/3/2011 12:47:00 PM

Smile ~ "This Is 'Very Beautiful Tahera;' An Image In Picturesque Exactly Like, 'You; Precious & Priceless!!!'" ~ You know, I never miss viewing any of, "Your Beauties," sweet and lovely canvas' in beautifully painted poetic artful colours and this one here is, a mirrored reflection of this wonderful truth about, "Your Treasourous Gift &, 'A Fave My Dear!!!'" ~ love, Always, christopher ~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 10:31:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Tahera. If this is for the contest I wish you the best. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 8:33:00 AM

That must be a beautiful locket with the blue bells engraved on it, Tahera. Very fine tanka! I think you have a winner in the blue and gold contest. This one is so creative as well as romantic! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/3/2011 7:34:00 AM

Very cute Tanka Tahera.As Andrea mentioned A wonderful way to write for the contest.Goodluck---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2011 11:35:00 PM

Very wonderful way to do this contest. I don't have a clue what to do, but I better get quickly to work!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/2/2011 10:17:00 PM

very pretty , lovely imagery Tahera