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Going Through the Motions

Endless emotions Countless notions A swelling ocean Loves bitter potion Night melts to dawn Another day gone My heart waits for you The one that is true It aches so bad, i wish you knew That I will love you Forever, through and through Till the sky no longer holds its brilliant shade of blue My soul breathes your name I shall never be the same You and I forever, with life as our game...

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Date: 6/5/2010 5:59:00 PM
wow. that's deep. i quite enjoyed that. keep writing.
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:03:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family... a very creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/5/2010 3:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jade. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:27:00 PM
One has to turn these motions to waves on the ocean. Then these brilliant shades of blue will remain forever true, for you >> James
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