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Going Down

There once was a fantastical player
who licked his way through every layer
he thought curls a pain
but it was quite plain
he'd stay down cause he wanted to lay her.

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  1. Date: 7/10/2014 8:43:00 PM
    You're good at this, I'm a smiling too xxx

  1. Date: 7/6/2014 11:17:00 PM
    Am too smilin'

  1. Date: 7/5/2014 1:44:00 AM
    I had to read twice for the wording of line three.Now I think I got it. Good one, Debs!

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    Date: 7/7/2014 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yup nuance & innuendo euphemisms [poetic tropes!]
  1. Date: 7/4/2014 6:24:00 PM
    Hmm..that's something quite interesting!

  1. Date: 6/30/2014 4:16:00 PM
    Interesting Limerick..Not sure if a girl or woman was on the team or if you are meaning something else..Thanks for stopping by..Rebecca is what most commonly call Black-Eyed Susans or a plant somewhat like a dwarf Sunflower but not really for the flower is a single layer of petals and the center is not as large or exaggerated..Thanks again..Oh, you can just type in pictures Rebecca plants or flowers and see what they look like..Sara

  1. Date: 6/29/2014 2:47:00 AM
    Ooh that's a bit saucy. Another fun cheeky read.

  1. Date: 6/24/2014 7:31:00 PM
    I'm going to allow my brain to absorb this, then move on

  1. Date: 6/24/2014 7:18:00 PM
    wow! what! Okay,,, LOL... Linda

  1. Date: 6/24/2014 5:59:00 PM
    A grand Bawdy limerick this is Debbie, had to laugh at this. nice one....peter