Gods Hand

I wonder sometimes how many people Are living their very lives like me With a forever forgiving love filled heart Thats constantly praying for all they see? Feeling as though I'm being guided by Gods hand Observing the people all around our town Watching them all make their life choices Before they are placed below ground I know there are alot of others like me That live life filled with His heartfelt love What we need to do is start showing it As He watches down on us all from above Dan Kearley:1-3-12

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/16/2013 4:51:00 PM

Dan; this is very beautiful. god is always whtching us and He knows our every move. I want Him to always watch over me. Thanks. Lucilla

Nathan Phillips

Date: 4/10/2012 8:21:00 PM

Great poem. Great message. Really enjoyed it.

Chrishanna Powell

Date: 1/10/2012 8:20:00 PM

Well written......Great message!

M.I.A .

Date: 1/4/2012 8:23:00 PM

What we need to do is start showing it... working on it too ;) great piece of advise.

Jim Pemberton

Date: 1/4/2012 6:25:00 PM

Thank you for your words of wisdom and inspiration! I give you my thanks and appreciation!

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/4/2012 3:49:00 PM

if your life is like my life you own the biggest gun in the universe. john

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2012 2:07:00 PM

Bless you Dan,Amen! oxox love Anne-Lise

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/4/2012 2:06:00 AM

Enjoyable poem, Dan. Thanks for your kind comment re my poem. God bless :) M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2012 10:52:00 PM

wow, I hope a lot of people are like you, DAn. What a wonderful way to be! Good poem. I enjoyed it.

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/3/2012 9:11:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem, Dan. I agree with you that we need to be more active in showing God's love to others through what we say and do. God Bless. Love, Kim

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/3/2012 7:38:00 PM

A great poem with fine descriptiveness and rhyming. It is customary to capitalize the first letter of all pronouns referring to God, therefore, "his" and "he" should begin with a capital "H". Also, in the first line of the third verse, you have "their" where you should have "there". You have merely used the incorrect homophone in that case.