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God's Cowards - For Contest

God’s Cowards* Sad demons roam mind’s endless plain searching blindly - frightened prey clinging to their earthly pain waiting for the “cowards day” Seek instant absolute redemptive inclusion in the “Rapture” lifted from their hiding places freed from evil’s capture. Sad demons roam mind’s endless plain searching blindly - frightened prey clinging to their earthly pain waiting for the “cowards day”. Shun the solace of the Saints cold sanctuaries towered creep about in shadowed fear where God’s cowards - cowered. 3/26/2016 *Prompt for poem was based on the song ‘God Hates a Coward’ by Tomahawk submitted to Lyrics – Poetry Contest sponsor – Rob Carmack

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Date: 4/25/2016 10:23:00 PM
Congratulations John, well done...
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Date: 4/25/2016 5:04:00 PM
Nice win, John...Linda
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Date: 4/25/2016 12:20:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, John. :)
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Date: 4/25/2016 2:56:00 AM
Greetings John. Congrats for your first placement in the contest, with this amazing penning!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:23:00 PM
Congrats on first place win with this very awesome write John..
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:35:00 AM
Amazing write, John. Congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 4/24/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Sandra, it was an interesting theme.
Date: 4/24/2016 7:03:00 AM
John, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful win with this outstanding write, so skillfully penned, 7 and fav ~
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John Lawless
Date: 4/24/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thanks BW, always appreciate your comments and especially a fav and a 7....
Date: 4/24/2016 12:11:00 AM
Congrats Jon for the top most slot! Love the line -Sad demons roam....searching blindly!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/24/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Baleen, always nice to hear from you.
Date: 4/23/2016 9:05:00 PM
Congrats John.
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John Lawless
Date: 4/24/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Rob, this was a very interesting them for the contest. Appreciate your dedication and work in making them challenging.

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