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The maple tree leaf Sheens of white upon them lay.... Crystalline manna Grass lying beneath Sticky to tennis shoe sole.... small sounds as I walk The diligent bee gathering, gathering, fast.... Quiets at twilight. INTERJECTION: Some would not return to the hive. Too heavy to fly, too far to crawl. I’m sure they will die... Inspired by a hive or hornets, deluging a huge maple tree in my back yard, which was weeping sap from the leaves. May 24 2010 For Rick's "Haiku You" contest

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Date: 6/6/2010 5:29:00 PM
Interesting observation of the nature in your back yard.
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Date: 6/1/2010 4:19:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative haiku series. Best wishes in the contest. Keep that creativity flowing. Karen
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Date: 6/1/2010 2:16:00 AM
very lovely, brilliant work on all your Haiku+more, enjoyed,..p.d.
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