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Goddess

Visions of you my soul swim to me the water is plentiful in my love for you. When in the stream clutch your flowers to your tender breasts naked and dripping with water as moonlight makes them bloom. I love your flowers for they are beautiful the way you show them swimming in the water soon to take my hand... ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/8/2014 11:38:00 AM
Hi Ken; As always you have created a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/8/2014 11:42:00 AM
Gracias por leer Lucilla!
Date: 3/5/2014 9:44:00 PM
Ken, beautiful poem. When it streams, it blooms. One of the best I read on this day. ~SKAT
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Date: 3/5/2014 9:53:00 PM
Thanks for visiting Skat!
Date: 3/4/2014 9:01:00 AM
i swoon over this dreamy piece, ken... simply enticing.. huggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/4/2014 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Nette!
Date: 3/3/2014 6:42:00 PM
this is a beautiful portrayal of your goddess. Romantic and sweet. What more to ask!!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/3/2014 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 3/3/2014 3:15:00 PM
Love is not easy to make original........ You did in this lovely poem!!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/3/2014 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Carrie...
Date: 3/3/2014 2:14:00 PM
Passionate work...I hope that the lady in your life enjoys reading this work..Thanks for stopping by..I am still working on "Unanchored Boat"..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/3/2014 2:16:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Sara..
Date: 3/3/2014 1:59:00 PM
I agree with what the three ladies below have stated. This is a very good romantic write.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/3/2014 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Robert..
Date: 3/3/2014 1:15:00 PM
Wow.. this can be interpreted in many different ways, beautifully penned and exceptionally visioned
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Date: 3/3/2014 1:24:00 PM
Thank you for visiting Amy..
Date: 3/3/2014 12:13:00 PM
Another beauty from you, Ken. The moonlight makes the flowers bloom...Magical
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/3/2014 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Eileen..Your visits are always appreciated!

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