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God Closed the Door

When God closed the door At the moment Noah finished the boat Rain poured from heaven The boat began to float At the moment Noah finished the boat And the heavens opened their tide The boat began to float As people cried and begged outside And the heavens opened their tide As Noah's hand were tied As people cried and begged outside The boat floated, animal made noises on ride As Noah's hands were tied At the closing of the door The boat floated, animals made noises on ride When God closed the door (Based on Genesis 7:16)

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Date: 10/29/2010 6:32:00 AM
Stunning! Really enjoy reading your work!
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Date: 10/29/2010 2:15:00 AM
beautiful peace here thank you duncan
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Date: 10/4/2010 7:04:00 PM
sounds like a pretty intense story. . we can imagine in your descreption. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 9/27/2010 10:06:00 AM
gd poem sara..uhmm... inspiring.. Olanike
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Date: 9/25/2010 5:31:00 PM
A great reminder of the Bible story Sara and how important Noah was in God's plan... we all have our own part in the Heavenly plan luv.. poetry is our avenue ... to share the message luv.. Ron' Mom passed away Thursday from Alzheimer's and my Eric Edward is now home for ten more days ...
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Date: 9/24/2010 9:25:00 PM
I love poems based on the bible. I named my sons with biblical names. Good write sara
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:06:00 PM
Yep, after the prophesy is over the minister of it's, hands are tied. I've enjoyed it Sara. Thanks for sharing. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/24/2010 1:16:00 PM
Sara, this is another masterpiece of faith and genius combined
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Date: 9/24/2010 12:33:00 PM
sweetheart, you are such a beautiful writer, much luck and love to you, Cindy P.S. Can you tell I enjoyed this write?
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:22:00 AM
And thanks for making me feel welcome to the kitchen. I look forward to enjoying many bowls of sumptuous soup. ~Jim
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:56:00 AM
Nice poem.
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Date: 9/24/2010 5:20:00 AM
Great use of the pantoum form to convey the story of Noah, Sara. I have often wondered what it would be like to be aboard that ark. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:10:00 AM
There is a proverb, when God closes the door he opens up windows, Sara
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Date: 9/24/2010 12:33:00 AM
I think this one would do well in a sunday school class, Sara. The kids reciting it! Nicely done. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:38:00 PM
Sara, A poem well done keep your fascinating poetry coming" Nathan
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:41:00 PM
I like this as it is, but your the poet...lol I so look forward to your comments, comming from a talented Poet who I admire...Thank you Michael
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:39:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:24:00 PM
I still need to work on this one...Maybe tomorrow it will come to me better..Sara
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