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Goat

Two high mountain peaks Boulder wedged between, goat stands Precariously

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/2/2009 1:08:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku Sara, Keep writing!
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Date: 9/27/2009 6:09:00 PM
funny
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Date: 9/26/2009 6:50:00 PM
Sara, I don't mean to be a pest, but shouldn't "stand" be on the second line? That way it would be 5-7-5. Nice use of unconventional punctuation. Keep writing!
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:36:00 PM
nicely penned, what are you talking about?
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:28:00 PM
Interesting Haiku, Hi Sara Thanks for your comments, Sincerely Moses
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