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Go To Hell

At long last Ivor’s gone to Hell, buried exactly where he fell. They didn't need to dig the hole Old Nick rose up to claim his soul. For evil had to have revenge for Ivor‘d spoiled Old Nicks best friend by teaching him that doing good was much more fun than spilling blood. But now down there I've heard some that tell Nick wants to throw him out of Hell. He’s losing souls now every day as Demons now join Ivor‘s play. So now most souls have fun in Hell and even pure evil is doing quite well. while Ivor‘s enjoys the Devils defeat by having a fire to warm up his feet. So if you pause by the grave of this dearly departed, just think of the fun you may join that he started. Try to be good, but if you can't... then oh well, you'll be welcomed and toasted if you go to Hell Ivor G Davies

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Date: 4/29/2015 6:52:00 PM
Very clever write Ivor - wish you had entered my limerick contest I think you would have produced a hilarious poem:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Ivor Davies
Date: 5/2/2015 5:04:00 PM
I write more nonsense than hilarity!
Date: 4/29/2015 6:50:00 PM
Been There Done That Daily! LOL Good go Ivor...as usual
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Date: 4/30/2015 4:14:00 AM
Judy "Been There Done That Daily!" never met you down there, you wasn't the Devil's wife was you?

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