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Go Only Onward

(06/08/2012) Come on now, Just take that step and move onward I know that pace is bumpy But across that is happiness could be If you don’t like the scene Close your eyes If you don’t like the noise Turn up the music inside your heart If you don’t like the company Ignore them, or better, leave them from the start Just make sure you cross that road Where across is filled with hope, awaits for your key to load

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/11/2013 1:29:00 AM
Inspiring! That is the words that first comes to mind when I read this... if you don't like the way things are you have no one to blame but yourself, profound! I am quickly becoming a fan of yours!
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Date: 8/15/2012 8:05:00 PM
what lovely and encouraging thoughts in this poem, sweetie. I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 8/13/2012 8:16:00 AM
great my my ego right now. time to move on.
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Date: 8/8/2012 12:47:00 AM
Love it Dinda!!Beautiful poem!
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:33:00 AM
dinda, you have an amazing use of language going on here and a flow that puts you right into the dance of life!... beautiful!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:30:00 AM
great write Dinda,lift yourself
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Date: 8/6/2012 10:13:00 AM
I like the metaphor you're using here about happiness and life :) soupmail
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Date: 8/6/2012 10:03:00 AM
Lovely my dear Dinda!! Maybe we should collab again now we are both back. Hope your well luv. Hugs Michael
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Date: 8/6/2012 9:31:00 AM
Dinda, very good written......move forward. (my last poem: "move forward") - Have a lovely new week Dinda, glad to see you back. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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