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Glorification

If bristles are mouth I shall use them to praise And my hairs are mouth I shall use them to praise For He's leading my way upon the choice I made For roads are many and manta devours my head In an abyssal ocean; brain drenched of ideation, Still I swam a fish hope for season To change to dry, to dry my brain Oh! Poor soul in complication As a beetle lifting a huge rock With its sucking jaw or beak When difficulty comes one's means One might turn into a goose Little fishes of land giggled and Stabbed me with outwards. Um! To God be the glory The choice I made for poetry Gave me true dimple grin As two lovers face each with grin Till my night was brightened By bright light shines as gold Orginated from the moon. 9/10/15

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Date: 9/17/2015 11:29:00 AM
Excellent poem my lovely friend read from you. Well penned. 7 i feel. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/14/2015 6:05:00 PM
AM, you have penned some wonderful lines, well done and thanks for visiting my poem, after the rainstorm ..
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:40:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..Way to go ..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:13:00 AM
Imagery is just fantastic Afolabi~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 9/14/2015 12:30:00 AM
Glorious and beautiful!
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Date: 9/12/2015 2:27:00 AM
wow, such lustrous imagery, afolabi... grraaet work!.. huggs
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Date: 9/11/2015 7:03:00 AM
You seem to sail upon the archipelago of poetry trying to find the most appropriate shore for a safe anchoring. Adventurous and challenging writing, my friend, A.M.!
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Date: 9/10/2015 9:49:00 PM
wow, this is got some very interesting imagery. You remind me of a modern Psalmist!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/19/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, God worthy of being praise every time because his presence in our life is unpredictable. I love your kind comment. Stay blessed.
Date: 9/10/2015 9:48:00 PM
Hey, did I ever tell you that A.m was MY initials too? Before I married! With my middle initail, I was ARM!! let me read this new poem now.
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/19/2015 3:40:00 PM
Hi Andrea, yes you did tell me you are ARM but you don't tell it full meaning. I really appreciate your comment to my page it always kind and uplift one.
Date: 9/10/2015 7:31:00 PM
Your style is avant garde to me Afolabi, it's use of thought forms is awesome, new ways of expression...ingenius! In poetry we find our origin, in love we know our magic. The way that you illustrate your relationship with God, Poetry, and the one you love is very powerful to me. J.A.B. A FAV!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/11/2015 4:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words I do appreciate it
Date: 9/10/2015 10:48:00 AM
A great use of imagery here A.M....good luck in the contest....Tim
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/11/2015 3:48:00 PM
Thanks dropped by to read and comment to my page
Date: 9/10/2015 9:56:00 AM
Very nice Afolabi. Good luck in the contest.
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/11/2015 3:42:00 PM
Thanks dropped by to read and comment
Date: 9/10/2015 9:25:00 AM
I like your interpretation of this contest. I wish you well and suspect this will do well.
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/11/2015 3:32:00 PM
Thank you for your pleasant comment I do appreciate it

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