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Glimpse Of You

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Glimpse Of You

Behold my threshold
I saw a face, stunning, lovely 
An angel with eyes, diamond glittered
throwing a light in the dark 
Pretty was her face, and divine her smile.

Saw her passing through for a while
My world stopped and smiled,
I got to see her and it was my luck
A gesture glued my lips and I was wild
After she left I am stuck.

Her brown eyes had everlasting story,
Tears rolling down the cheeks made them shine
She looked fresh even she was sad
Her lovely picture made me mad.

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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:41:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS, SURAJIT, on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:45:00 PM
    Surajit, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA .....

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:58:00 AM
    welcome to soup Surajit fine poem to start with congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:01:00 PM
    Surajit, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

    Dahal Avatar Surajit Dahal
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THanks a lot for the comment!! I would definitely give my best to meet the other poets out here..!!
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:29:00 PM
    An interesting twist on a love poem with a surprise ending!

    Dahal Avatar Surajit Dahal
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot..!!