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Glimpse Behind the Curtain

At my age, I believe I live enough. Except life is what you make it; a mixture of personal experience. I indulge in carnal pleasures to hit a climax of an euphoric ecstasy. The kiss from whiskey- It’s rough and harsh while burning my lips, yet it caresses my throat with a pleasant singe. Another morning of awkwardness with a wayward seductress. She came and went like a thief in the night, but we were entwined in erotic poetry; a sultry confidante of my vulnerabilities. Just another sip of fresh poison, and I delve into paradise. However, the intoxication remains the same as I mesh with other restless strays. We’re all on cloud nine at this party! The lights, music and substances are plentiful for the burdened and heavy-laden. There’s rest for both wicked and weary here- Lay your demons down! Maybe I’m in need of absolution… or I’ll continue to construct these thoughts as the room is spinning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/3/2015 1:54:00 AM
Inspiring write Ty, welcome to PS. You possess a wonderful pen
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Date: 12/29/2014 1:08:00 PM
keep writing as the room spins...very good!
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Date: 12/27/2014 6:52:00 AM
Hi Ty! Thank you for letting us have a quick fleeting look beyond your outer self. This poem is frank and expressive. A very fitting introductory write on Soup! Definitely merits a 7 rating. // paul
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Date: 12/20/2014 9:23:00 PM
I am shocked, it's a great poem. I felt like reading Edgar Alan Poe or Charles Baudelaire. Very powerful and emotional. This poem reminds me a song titled: Let Me Go, Devil! sang by Tex Ritter.
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Date: 12/20/2014 4:15:00 PM
TY T.,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/11/2014 5:34:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ty - I choose your first sad, touching and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2014 2:09:00 PM
Thanks for the glimpse behind the curtain of this tragic lifestyle(may not be tragic to others?) I like "lay down your demons" line. There is a better way for those who chose to take it. God sees all. Blessings to you this Christmas season. Darlene
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