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Give Me Your Mark

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Give Me Your Mark

You showed me no mercy for my troubled soul
You crushed my dreams and took my innocent goal
You kissed me goodnight but you ran and stole,
My morning smile and left me with no role

To think it was you who held me too tight
The one person who taught me how to fight
And was it not you who showed me the light?
The one who promised me the love tonight.

If this is what I get for loving you so dearly
Then forgive me but I'll be coming for you severely
And I shall not but show such pride and no mercy
For the wound you brought will now show you the pain sincerely

I take not vengeance but me showing you my bark
For killing my only heart and taking its mark
And yet my kindness still reside upon my arc
So before I start, I shall ask you to give me your mark.

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  1. Date: 3/25/2012 2:52:00 PM
    Great write, Sarah. so refreshing yet quite interesting on how the story takes us through the ups and downs of love. Bless you, Gordon

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 8:54:00 PM
    Well done bhie :) I'm so proud that you are getting lots of feed back from other readers. :)

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 6:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured write this week Sarah. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 11:38:00 AM
    Congrats on your weekly feature!

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 2:32:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon.. I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon.Taking vengeance will not fix anything even though it is something that we as humans have a tendency to want to do..Sara

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri
    Date: 3/12/2012 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    it is true, vengeance wont do us any good yet we seek after it...thank you for reading this :)..God bless.
  1. Date: 3/12/2012 12:25:00 PM
    Its alwas amazing to see how much of a point can be made even with the barrier of rhyming. Great poem. =)

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri
    Date: 3/12/2012 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Charles :)
    Jefferson Avatar Charles Jefferson
    Date: 3/12/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *always*
  1. Date: 3/11/2012 9:00:00 PM
    an excellent write! rhyme has never been my strong point thus i always enjoy and admire those who do it well. great poem and welcome to the soup

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 8:24:00 PM
    very interesting monorhymes miss Sarah. Hard to do and keep to the theme but you've done a lovely job of it.

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 5:55:00 PM
    Sarah I love this poem

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri
    Date: 3/11/2012 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much :) I'm glad you love it.
  1. Date: 3/11/2012 5:39:00 PM
    Hello. Sarah. Are you fairly new here? I enjoyed your poem. Let me go see one more.

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri
    Date: 3/11/2012 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes I am new here, I just started 4th of March.. Thank you very much for liking it :)
  1. Date: 3/11/2012 5:34:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poetry Sarah, hugs,vie

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri
    Date: 3/11/2012 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Vienna..Thank you for all your great comments on my works <3