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Give Me Your Mark

You showed me no mercy for my troubled soul You crushed my dreams and took my innocent goal You kissed me goodnight but you ran and stole, My morning smile and left me with no role To think it was you who held me too tight The one person who taught me how to fight And was it not you who showed me the light? The one who promised me the love tonight. If this is what I get for loving you so dearly Then forgive me but I'll be coming for you severely And I shall not show no pride and no mercy For the wound you brought will show you the pain sincerely I take not vengeance but me showing you my bark For killing my only heart and taking its mark Yet my kindness still resides upon my arc So before I start, I shall ask you to give me your mark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/25/2012 2:52:00 PM
Great write, Sarah. so refreshing yet quite interesting on how the story takes us through the ups and downs of love. Bless you, Gordon
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Date: 3/23/2012 8:54:00 PM
Well done bhie :) I'm so proud that you are getting lots of feed back from other readers. :)
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Date: 3/22/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write this week Sarah. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/12/2012 2:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon.. I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon.Taking vengeance will not fix anything even though it is something that we as humans have a tendency to want to do..Sara
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/12/2012 2:35:00 PM
it is true, vengeance wont do us any good yet we seek after it...thank you for reading this :)..God bless.
Date: 3/12/2012 12:25:00 PM
Its alwas amazing to see how much of a point can be made even with the barrier of rhyming. Great poem. =)
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/12/2012 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Charles :)
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Charles Jefferson
Date: 3/12/2012 12:26:00 PM
*always*
Date: 3/11/2012 9:00:00 PM
an excellent write! rhyme has never been my strong point thus i always enjoy and admire those who do it well. great poem and welcome to the soup
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Date: 3/11/2012 8:24:00 PM
very interesting monorhymes miss Sarah. Hard to do and keep to the theme but you've done a lovely job of it.
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:55:00 PM
Sarah I love this poem
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/11/2012 5:58:00 PM
Thank you very much :) I'm glad you love it.
Date: 3/11/2012 5:39:00 PM
Hello. Sarah. Are you fairly new here? I enjoyed your poem. Let me go see one more.
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/11/2012 5:40:00 PM
Yes I am new here, I just started 4th of March.. Thank you very much for liking it :)

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