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Gifts of the Night

Faint stillness of the night falls swiftly down and masked raccoons now pillage darkest night. Fluffed owls with sparkling eyes are flying free and rabbits, gently moving, sniff the air... The hounds - from hunter lost - do bay and whine! Marked deer with spots or racks go pawing trails and bear cubs ramble near a sparkling stream. Uncommon moths blink near the lights outside and possums scramble up the hillside earth. Soft light of moon obscures the beauty there and adds romance to this nocturnal scene. Amid the forest’s trees of pine and oak, these charms display the gift of God’s design! Faint STILL-ness OF the NIGHT falls SWIFT-ly DOWN and MASKED rac-COONS now PIL-lage DARK-est NIGHT Fluffed OWLS with SPARK-ling EYES are FLY-ing FREE and RAB-bits, GEN-tly MOV-ing, SNIFF the AIR The HOUNDS, from HUN-ter LOST, do BAY and WHINE Marked DEER with SPOTS or RACKS go PAW-ing TRAILS and BEAR cubs RAM-ble NEAR a SPARK-ling STREAM Un-COM-mon MOTHS blink NEAR the LIGHTS out-SIDE and POS-sums SCRAM-bles UP the HILL-side EARTH Soft LIGHT of MOON ob-SCURES the BEAU-ty THERE And ADDS ro-MANCE to THIS noc-TURN-al SCENE a-MID the FOR-est’s TREES of PINE and OAK these CHARMS dis-PLAY the GIFT of GOD’S de-SIGN ©by Regina Riddle Written on July 29, 2014 Re-written for contest on July 30, 2014 Re-written twice for contest on July 31, 2014 – with LOTS of help from sponsor and much thanks to Roy Jerden For: For Newer Poets: An Exercise in Iambic Pentameter - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Roy Jerden I deliver newspapers at night on a rural route and see all of these nocturnal creatures along my journey… the origins of the poem.

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Date: 11/27/2016 9:28:00 PM
I was rereading old comments and replies on my poems, and decided to reread this piece, and I'm so glad I did. Genuinely felt so new but so familiar. I think that is what a lot of writing lacks these days. Your writing is something you should cherish and encourage in other people, I think you do that beautifully. Keep writing and keep singing your soul song. I hope inn the time that has passed since my last comment, you feel better about your iambic work! Again, very well done.
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Date: 5/18/2015 1:56:00 PM
REGINA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:33:00 PM
Regina, this is an inspiring write. It has me hurriedly scrolling back to re-read it and relax into the wonder of its aura.
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:51:00 AM
Hi Regina, nice to see you on Roy's top list...PD
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:28:00 AM
Wow that's an amazing write my dear friend Regina! Great work, big congrats!
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Date: 8/20/2014 2:22:00 AM
beautiful description Regina - i chickened out of this contest so very well done for persevering ! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:20:00 PM
Sounds wonderful.... Congrats Gina
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:01:00 PM
wonderful, we get lots of nighttime creatures here too, drive safe, grats on your great win!
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:53:00 PM
Back again, Regina...this time with deserved congratulations; this top placing was in the air!! // paul
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations Regina! The images are so wonderful in this poem and it runs very smoothly along to a great conclusion. I can see these critters in my mind. Great job! D.
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:07:00 PM
GREAT meter and great descriptions of the night life. (not the night life of the cities!! haha) Congrats on a marvelous win.
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Date: 8/19/2014 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Regina! You may remove the scansion, now, if you like. Cheers, Roy
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/20/2014 2:59:00 PM
Thank you for all your help. God bless you and happy writing - You taught me so much. I love learning. Anything you think I should know please tell me. It helps me trememdously. Love and prayers, Gina
Date: 8/2/2014 10:27:00 PM
He Regina, Thanks for your kind words on my poem; I struggle with Iambic Pentameter myself all too often but I've never thought to write it as I see you've done here, so thank you for that! This little trick will make me a lot more confident when writing my own if I sound it out as you have! Really enjoyed this poem your imagery of the animals is sensational; you really paint a picture here in the limited constraints of Iambic Pentameter. Well done! Darren Mallett
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/3/2014 12:50:00 PM
I had a TON of help with this one. I had no idea what I was doing. I want to learn it well, but am going to move slowly with them because they scare me,. I WANT to learn multiple forms of poetry and even they aren't prefect, try the new on. I love what I'm learning here. It's nice. You should find the contest page and enter one if your poems. He's very helpful and will be delighted with your work.Thanks for commenting and reminding me I need to try another iambic parameter - scarey stuff,.
Date: 7/29/2014 3:17:00 PM
Beautiful night scenes in a peaceful and enchanting atmosphere; very well expressed, Regina. gl in contest. // paul
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/3/2014 1:08:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments. I hope to read more of your work as time permits... You've provided me with some wonderful comments and I really appreciate that. God bless you.

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