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Getting Some Air

6-15-13 Getting Some Air Been too long since you been gone, I feel the breeze blow between us, I see emptiness of time gone by, Up above the chatter,feet free, Getting some air in the hang time, Busy rhymes fill my mind,so long.

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Date: 9/18/2013 8:29:00 PM
simple descriptive, deeply written in few words. Great poem, Ricky. Enjoyable indeed. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace.
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