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Get Out of My Way

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Get Out of My Way

As I fly above my Genius Plain
I look at life not quite the same
I see wastes of Skin attempt again
To block my right of way!
Oh, give me Beauty imperfections,
Dissect the Heart and give me sections!
So I may dine on blood and wine,
My natural selections

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  1. Date: 2/21/2014 8:55:00 AM
    Chan Chan I am now officially scared of you. LOL I might have to go to therapy cause of this cannibalistic poem. HEE HEE This is some dark and eerie stuff. Nicely done Thanks for the silly and crazy comment on my Meanness Can't Inhibit You Poem. Huggies

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    Date: 2/21/2014 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is kinda dark lol. Thanks, Sweet Pea :)
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 11:41:00 PM
    I like the "...wastes of Skin...", so deliciously dark. I've been looking for your poetry for some time, and reading this makes me glad I've finally found ya.

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    Date: 11/2/2013 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm happy you found me also, Scott. Hope you enjoy more of my pieces. Thanks for dropping by and for the review :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:42:00 AM
    crude and barbaric but works well you might have to kill for another serving. . . Poe image

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    Date: 8/29/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Danesh. Poe has been a major poetic influence on me, so I'm sure there are conscious and unconscious nods to him here and there in my work. Glad you felt like it was barbaric and crude; I thought it had that feeling as well. Thanks for the astute review :)