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Gentle Awakening

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Gentle Awakening

sea birds coo
ocean fog perturbs seashells
sun greets dawn

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:59:00 AM
    Hey, you got an excellent haiku here, too...really good

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 11:56:00 PM
    Laura, a beautiful haiku..love the image..pd

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 2:55:00 PM
    I would enjoy creating a pictograph language for these strange and stimulating writes of yours - you are so good at being strange Laura - J.A.B. %