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Good and bad, large and small
Eternally connected twosomes
Male and female, yin and yang
Inseparable Siamese twins
Night and day, spring and fall
Infinite cosmic tango 

(written for the contest Acrostic Astrology)

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  1. Date: 5/10/2009 2:45:00 AM
    Just magic, James

  1. Date: 5/10/2009 2:07:00 AM
    Ah, Niels, you have described my Gemini sister so well. It is always an "Infinite cosmic tango" when I'm with her. She can be the most loving and most cruel person at times. "Night and day," I never know which to expect. Twins, indeed. Love your acrostic style! Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 10:20:00 PM
    wonderful ------charma

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 7:01:00 AM
    Well, this is wonderful and describes well, the gemini. I love love love that last line. It is perfect! Love Christie

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 6:25:00 AM
    Beautiful. My question: Should the title "Gemini" dwell any line for which the poem is portraying? Otherwise, should the name be "Cosmic Tango" in lieu of "Gemini"..? I like it so much, no loops in it, and it is meaningful. I need to read more about acrostic. All the best.