Geisha

I admire the geisha girl’s jet black hair, pretty white face and embroidered pink silk robe as we sip our tea For Deb’s Walk Softly contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 9:40:00 PM

Hi Jack, how are you? , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/28/2013 8:55:00 PM

Congrats on your poem being featured

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2013 2:13:00 PM

Nicely done Jack........ this was the perfect scene for something quite softly traditional.......the tea ceremony. Congratulations on this poem being featured too !!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/12/2013 9:17:00 PM

Nice one could see this painted up lady. It has been a busy week. We are building a new deck and taking the old one down. Did half of the deck this week and will do the other half in the next few weeks. It is a huge deck 12x26 feet.love phyl

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/11/2013 7:09:00 PM

You paint the picture so well...I can see the Geisha as she walks softly at a snail's pace! Great job, Jack; and my best wishes for the contest...it's already a winner to me. Always, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2013 7:26:00 AM

I don't know but for some reason I thought you were going to say the robe was open. hee hee. I wish I knew what to do for this contest. You are great at just popping up with something interesting!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2013 11:44:00 AM

- A very good poem Jack - Wish you luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/8/2013 8:01:00 AM

nice one! you've painted a very clear picture here...

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/7/2013 6:39:00 PM

This is a superb and enlightening write my friend! I just love your short verses you write, it just shows that to be a good poet you don't have to write a long poem! Yes, that means you are a good poet Jack! Actually you're a great poet my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2013 5:52:00 PM

Ahh!! Very descriptive one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visits and cupping your hand..Sara