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Garden So Rare--Andaree

I trailed a garden once, which was pure delight Enhanced by bold mums and tulips white;- Though unkempt, it had an air Of sun-dancing there, A landscape Rare Like morn’s drape. Stunned by wild bloom’s flair Vignettes of dreams found nowhere; That my youth’s eyes remember how bright, I trailed a garden once, which was pure delight! The Andaree – Contest II Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 10/14/2015

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Date: 10/22/2015 1:05:00 AM
Nette. I don't know how I counted the syllables wrong. Anyway, I've recounted and the first line is 11 syllables after all, So Congratulations. This is a beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:37:00 PM
Nette, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
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Date: 10/20/2015 7:43:00 AM
A rare rose that brightness is! A truly great poem and imagery if fantastic! A7
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Date: 10/18/2015 3:17:00 PM
very beautifully penned Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:00:00 PM
I enjoyed this very much. I was entertained and lifted by your beautiful words ... CayCay
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Date: 10/14/2015 11:17:00 AM
A delightful read, Nette. All the best! hugs!
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Date: 10/14/2015 10:00:00 AM
You ar a breath of fresh air Nette!
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Date: 10/14/2015 5:48:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful in its rhyme and its shape! Hugs and a seven dear, nette!
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Date: 10/14/2015 2:17:00 AM
Poem of hearts and aces. Magnificent experience and view!
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Date: 10/13/2015 7:49:00 PM
love it Nette gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 10/13/2015 4:46:00 PM
This is incredible nette. One of the best I have read in this form
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Date: 10/13/2015 3:09:00 PM
Yes, vignettes of this garden scene can never be duplicated. Finest poem in full bloom!
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Date: 10/13/2015 2:28:00 PM
- I agree with our friend B.W. ..... Beautiful, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/13/2015 2:27:00 PM
Flowing with a pageantry of bloomed lines in the garden of your verse!Highly rated, Nette
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Date: 10/13/2015 2:23:00 PM
Nette, you have penned a winner for sure, utterly beautiful, I love it 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, He has my heart ...
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