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Gap In the Leland Cyprus

Open the eyes of my heart As open as the space In the Leland Cyprus Let the gap see truly thee Open the eyes of my heart Let the spirit flow inward Filling to the overflow Let me have compassion Open the eyes of my heart Let the spirit flow outward With love, tenderness Caring and concern Open the eyes of my heart Seeing all the world's wrong Spreading thy healing message Love is the key for you and me

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/6/2010 12:31:00 PM

this poem can be lryics. its a beautiful poem filled with a poets heart of love. and caring as well. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/6/2010 5:08:00 AM

nicely done, Sara...asking for the continued grace to share the message you are spreading. Thanks you for your comments.

Kris Walters

Date: 8/5/2010 6:34:00 AM

Beautiful! I love the repeating line to propel this along. Gentle and caring, I enjoyed this. :) Kris

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/5/2010 5:27:00 AM

Yes this is really the key, Sara! Enjoyed your poem and thank you for all your kind comments!..Have a nice day!...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/4/2010 9:36:00 PM

Quite an inspirational write and lovely comparison to the tree.. enjoyed your words very beautiful Sara... Love is the key for you and me.. yes..my friend..yes..it is..luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/4/2010 6:12:00 PM

enjoyed...hope you feel better!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2010 7:42:00 AM

Enjoyed Sara, have a nice one,..p.d.

Earle Brown

Date: 8/4/2010 5:23:00 AM

Inspiring write, Sara. I love the first stanza.