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Galactic Star

Galactic star burst, Cinematic shining versed Playing into you, Dreams being rehearsed A unique set of ways, In your milky ways Though led in light, Your darkness is deeply portrayed What is to shining, Of a shooting star To wish a dream, Mused of a rising star Enlightened fragment, Peacefully displaced Constellations, Of a deeper trace To rise and set, Of ones reflect The brightest stars, Cause and effect

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/8/2016 7:27:00 AM
Wonderful rhyme scheme and theme.
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 11/8/2016 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Phil
Date: 9/13/2016 6:38:00 PM
Very nicely written, Tiffany, with great rhythm, too! I enjoyed reading this :)
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 9/14/2016 8:57:00 AM
TY Laura....Glad you enjoyed it!!

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