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Future Dreams

Just imagine In a millennium from now The dreams we have That our minds plough As us humans evolve Into what is unknown Will our future dreams Be able to be shown Just think Before we awake Our dreams are saved For us to remake We sit down Before a white wall Open our eyes As our dreams befall To have the power To control our dreams Wake the next day Our personal live stream I think our mind Is in its infancy If we hang around Maybe we'll see?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/11/2009 2:58:00 AM
I agree. we are but babies. when we hit 5D, it will all be instantanious. think it=happen. instant. I plan on being there. :) Great poem forward. love, Kristin
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Date: 5/10/2009 5:33:00 PM
I have a poem caalled Lucid Dreaming..this reminds me of that. Oh, to control our minds..maybe we'll see? Love, BG
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:43:00 PM
Again you touch on a subject that I find so intriguing, James! Since doctors say we only use a small portion of our brains now, we may very well "have the power To control our dreams" at some point in time. Truly, "our mind Is in its infancy." Like many of your other poems, this goes into my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:32:00 AM
I think you're right, I loved the first and last stanza, great work...Raul
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:31:00 AM
An uplifting piece. I love the idea of the mind ploughing, sowing dreams of the future. Kat x
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