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Futura When gorillas will be mere robots and soulful life a distant dream, Chained as they struggle for freedom Embers in eyes with anger aglow, Glaring history, extinction sits on pyre. Written Nov 3rd, 2015 For contest- in five lines or less#1 Sponsor- Skat A Awarded 10th place win

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Date: 11/12/2015 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Dr. Upma!
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Date: 11/11/2015 3:01:00 PM
A look into the future ... a clever interpretation of this visual, Upma; I like your end line! Congratulations on a worthy win in which the placing could have been higher. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/11/2015 11:35:00 AM
So true, unfortunately, so true in this dark age.
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:18:00 AM
Great Poem. Enjoyed reading. Congrats for placement in contest. I will love to know your address Best Wishes. Anisha D
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:35:00 AM
great last line for this kind of poem! Congrats for the win.
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:02:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma Great twist on a poem. Especially the dire situation of the gorilla. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/8/2015 12:05:00 AM
Dr. Upma, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:09:00 PM
Congrats,....so scary a msg.vry nice indeed
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:18:00 PM
congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:16:00 PM
Dr Upma,, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2015 8:58:00 PM
I like it, its deep and prophetic. A7
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Date: 11/3/2015 6:36:00 PM
I like this. It puts me in mind of Planet of the Apes movies!! Cool one.
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