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Fully Equipped

I’ve already packed Everything you need For your trip, Little One. “Yes,” she said, “But I’ve never been To Chicago before, And I just might need My old hairbrush And this book I used to like, And…” it all went Into her backpack I smiled then And again later As we walked the long concourse. Steps faltered And tears of fatigue flowed Down my daughter’s face Until a loving elder brother Took the unnecessary burden So we all Could make our plane. I shoulder my own Unwieldy baggage, And trudge with faltering step, Tears of frustration And fatigue Rolling down my face. I fail to acknowledge That Father has sent me Already fully equipped, And I’m reluctant to release My unnecessary burden To the Brother who Would carry it for me. And in my obstinance I just might miss My flight!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 8:51:00 PM
Hi SOnja, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:35:00 AM
Sonja, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2013 9:22:00 AM
I hope you do not miss your flight Sonja, after all your life's already equipped. This is a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m stopping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* I am here to make you feel welcomed and read all your new incoming poems. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda
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