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feeble and exhausted, assume my time is near so, I will wait for dawn when robins appear their soothing chorus once more we can hear while I displace the earth to house the handsome urn of your lovely bones under the oak where it doesn’t burn and mark the spot for them to return unite us together when it’s my turn. June 10, 2016
Rhyme scheme aaabbbb 7 lines, no specific syllable count Inspired by the novel title, The Lovely Bones, by Alice Sebold For the contest-Titles of Novels by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 6/14/2016 4:30:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Sara; sad emotions. Congratulations on a deserved win. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/14/2016 2:52:00 PM
you picked the theme that I liked best. Good entry and win. Congrats, Sara
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:37:00 AM
what i turned into here was the poignant scene and language of your poem, sara!.. thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats!..huggs
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Date: 6/13/2016 9:40:00 AM
I love this one!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/13/2016 9:42:00 AM
Thanks Ingrid for stopping by!
Date: 6/11/2016 6:59:00 PM
I really like your take on lovely bones, Sara. One of my favorites I have seen for the contest so far.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/12/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Andrea,appreciate the encouragement!
Date: 6/10/2016 11:14:00 PM
Lovely poem on a lovely act with an eye to a lovely return... GL...
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/11/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Probir!

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