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Fully Booked 1

Seemingly, a century spent behind fortress walls, my sanity guarded by seclusion. Time, spent alone crawls, until unwanted intrusion. Whispers heard, a crying moan. "One hundred years of solitude:" my tombstone. 6/11/16 Titles of Novels "One Hundred Years of Solitude" 7 lines in the word pattern of: 7-5-3-1-3-5-7 Rhyming pattern of: a-b-c-a-b-c-c

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Charlie Smith

Date: 6/14/2016 8:06:00 PM

Congratulations Marti, well done...

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2016 4:12:00 PM

Creative content and pattern, Marti. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2016 2:47:00 PM

wowowow, FIRST place. BIG congrats, Marti!

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 6/14/2016 8:43:00 AM

Congratulation Marti on a well deserved spot!Greta poem!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/14/2016 4:42:00 AM

I really enjoyed this deep, mysterious write!! Congrats Marti, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2016 3:03:00 AM

marti, this is creatively designed with a unique form that i may borrow in the future.. shine on and thanks for being part of my contest... my best congrats and huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2016 11:29:00 AM

I do like the form you invented Marti - great spooky imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2016 11:05:00 AM

wow, GOOD and creepy, I'LL say!!! I loved this. your pattern is unique too. The middle word reminds me a wee bit of the Andaree form I invented last year and did a contest about! It's fun to me to see that you choose word patterns and not syllables for your lines. I love that you did 7/5/3/ 1/ Those are my FAVORITE numbers!!! If this does not score high, I'll be very surprised.