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Haiku 919

full moon of autumn- as big as my daughters eyes at the pumpkin patch __________

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Rick Parise

Date: 9/24/2016 8:56:00 PM

Thanks to ALL...........I enjoyed searching for that ONE PICTURE in time....

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/22/2016 4:09:00 PM

Fantastic haiku, Rick! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/21/2016 11:06:00 AM

Sweet thoughts Rick, congratulations...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/20/2016 7:58:00 PM

Back with congrats :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:32:00 PM

Then I looked up and saw your big eye on your avatar. hahaha Like father like daughter!!

Rick Parise
Date: 9/24/2016 8:55:00 PM

Hey You!!!! Blessing To You and Yours...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:27:00 PM

Rick, of all the Ku I have seen so far, this is OUTSTANDING because it is exactly how a haiku was meant to be. FAVE

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 4:21:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 3:54:00 PM

Fell in love with this right away Rick...I LOVE your pen!!! congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo (soupie)

Rick Parise
Date: 9/24/2016 8:53:00 PM

09-19-2016 ()() OPPS................

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/19/2016 2:27:00 PM

Nice one, Rick.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/19/2016 10:35:00 AM

Very nice ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/19/2016 9:35:00 AM

Beautiful!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2016 8:47:00 AM

Great haiku Rick - I love the clever imagery .. have never seen pumpkins growing for real but I can just imagine it:-)hugs Jan xx