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Frustrating Voices

I get so frustrated with the voices in my head They seem to tell stories when I'm ready for bed They sound so amazing I should write this all down But as soon as I locate a pen I don't hear a sound Tell me the story repeat it again I'll write it on paper and share with my friends I try to remember but to no avail Papers get crumbled because memory fails Frustration seeps in I almost give up The voices are asleep so I'm just out of luck But then I remember just one little line The rest I just wing it to make the poem rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/10/2012 10:59:00 AM
same here, Carmen. VERY very fustrating. fav'd <3
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/10/2012 11:01:00 AM
Yes funny how I never have a pen near... : )
Date: 6/8/2012 10:47:00 AM
A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Carmen. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/8/2012 1:26:00 PM
Thanks for the sweet words Carol : )
Date: 6/8/2012 2:11:00 AM
The lament of the lyrical soul, with a cashed out bong and an empty bowl...! I feel the pain, but like u we still roll!..Keep the good vibe and an accurate toll. -Sample
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/8/2012 3:01:00 AM
Wow your really good... Thanks for the advice

Book: Shattered Sighs