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Frozen In Crystalline 2

Gliding smoothly across the lake reaching thin ice, a fatal mistake. Hopefully I get extra points for being first! First time trying this form.

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 3:33:00 PM

I love your creative interpretation, Richard! Congrats to you on an awesome win! Hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 4:18:00 PM

Thanks Rhonda, I am pleased you like it. Hugs back to you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:55:00 AM

unique approach on the picture and theme, rich..cheers to you for your great win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Nette.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/29/2014 11:11:00 PM

And back again wid huge congrats Richard on this winning awesome write!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 8:42:00 AM

Much appreciated.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/29/2014 10:03:00 PM

a beauty in your pen Sir Chard.. :)! congrats much! God bless you.. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 8:43:00 AM

Thanks dear Olive.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/29/2014 6:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Richard! Sandra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 8:44:00 AM

Thanks Sandra.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 1:21:00 PM

lovely Rick congrats on win hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 8:45:00 AM

Hugs back to you Shadow.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:25:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Richard-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 8:40:00 AM

Thanks sweet Jan.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/29/2014 10:42:00 AM

Hi Richard, Nice winter adventure. Icy and dicey. Good job. Congratulations on your win. Earl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 8:39:00 AM

Thanks Earl.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 8:22:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2014 9:16:00 AM

Thanks Sarah.

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2014 6:21:00 AM

Congrats on your win Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2014 9:17:00 AM

Thanks Joseph.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 6:02:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Richard! Very deserved! // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2014 9:18:00 AM

Thanks Paul.

Len Gasun

Date: 11/29/2014 1:51:00 AM

First time to try but you did it very successfully and extraordinarily well my very dear friend Richard! I like it. Big congratulations! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2014 9:19:00 AM

Thanks Leonora.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/29/2014 1:18:00 AM

Congrats on the win Richard and happy Weekend...huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2014 9:20:00 AM

You as well Kayode, hugs back.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:57:00 AM

I think you did wonderfully for your first one, Richard. I was wondering who could have written this one. BIG congrats. (I would have scored you higher, but I did not see a lake in that picture!)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2014 9:15:00 AM

Is it hard to imagine a bench looking out at a lake? In my minds eye the lake is covered by a thin layer of snow. The color of the picture made me think of ice. The lonely scene and solitary bench symbolizing death and mourning. I have to admit I am dissapointed with the placement.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/24/2014 7:46:00 AM

This is like a metaphor for life. We are striding along on what we think is the right path only to fall through because we don't have a firm foundation under us.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2014 8:31:00 AM

You have captured my thoughts perfectly. May all your ice be thick ice!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/23/2014 1:14:00 AM

A joyous occasion can turn hazardous so quickly, if we are not careful... There is hidden wisdom in these words, I think. Nice work, Richard. Good luck in Andrea's contest!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2014 8:34:00 AM

Thanks Kelly.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/22/2014 10:14:00 PM

Well thought out Richard, goodluck in the contest...huggs