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Frozen Feelings

Frozen Feelings Like ice and ice Satin purple ribbon in between Describe the lines Echoes, and voice in between Like a sculpture of an angel Holding a frozen ice cold heart She’s the ice princess of your Fenced in world Defined by limits of your own mind Co-sign her heart to dependence For you can’t overcome the shadows of your past And the horns sound To glorify her And what are you supposed to do When the world adores the ice princess Of your heart If only you could melt her To only to chisel her Into your truest of true beauty queen But no she’s your angel Frozen and unmoving at times To an exaggerated few Sing her praises Compliment her ways See the angel and not your past See the in between lines of what is not being said Hear the silence of her words That you are her comfort and company And your heart is irreplaceable to her Skate an imperfectly perfect line As the flowers adorn your love Yeah, co-sign your lover and skate On the ice in the vehicle of your chariots And the song never ends And the story only bends And the days grow shorter And the years grow longer And together you sing a song together Melted hearts become one beating To the sound of its Own drum By Susan Mills

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2010 5:44:00 PM
Hello, Susan here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.
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Date: 9/13/2010 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:56:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:11:00 AM
Excellent narrative Susan. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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