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Frozen

Snow creeping drifting down Falling slowly toward the ground As October skies turn gray Growing colder along the way Silence haunting in the night Wolves baying giving a fright Hearing footsteps in the wind In the darkness it begins A chill running down the spine An eery wind blows through the pine A figure forming in the distance He who chases with persistence Getting closer with every stride His eyes glowing with determined pride Shaking feet paralyzed with fear Watching weary as he draws near Finally catching his elusive prey Too late to try running away Surrendering to this evil man Without a fight taking his hand Still freezing as we leave Promising no warmth upon this eve

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2012 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your Halloween Night contest win Ashley. Love, Carol
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 10/6/2012 10:12:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 9/20/2012 5:41:00 AM
Sure can be a scary evening, well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 10/6/2012 10:12:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/19/2012 9:14:00 PM
ASHLEY, congratulations in Gail's spectacular and eerie "Halloween Night " contest. Much enjoyed stopping by to read and devote myself to the soup.. :-) always~ PD
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 10/6/2012 10:13:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/19/2012 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations on this terrific win Ashley xx
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 9/19/2012 9:20:00 AM
Thank you!! It was completely unexpected!!
Date: 9/18/2012 9:40:00 PM
CONGRATS ASHLEY ON A SUPER WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ..
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 9/19/2012 9:19:00 AM
Thank you!! Never expected that to happen!
Date: 9/12/2012 12:32:00 PM
Usually rhyme has a light and upbeat feel, but I really love how you've darkened it and created this awesome tale. Love it! - Alexa
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 9/12/2012 2:26:00 PM
Thank you :)

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