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From Where I Stand

From Where I Stand (A take on Romeo and Juliet) The fates of time were too unkind You left the little girl behind Too long the passage time cannot heal We play the cards the gods do deal Yet still you are so young and beautiful And I love you so, your lips of cherry wine Your eyes that doth shine Shame the stars that glow If sleight of hand or trick of sight Could have brought their love to light, So many long years ago Into the river of love they’d flow The water’s pure would take our love Then reflect on these years we didn’t share Worth the wait you’re everything I adore So take this heart I offer to you Their minds and hearts entwined as one To finish what their love begun To dance the dance that lovers do You with me and I with you. Fate did find, eyes and arms satisfied With your angelic smile your gentle touch Your kiss so tenderly I plea, never set me free, And you’ll forever be young and beautiful to me! © Harry J Horsman © Mandy Tams 2016 Copyright © 2016 harry horsman

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Date: 10/17/2018 6:13:00 AM
Amazing and brilliant poem here...a true masterpiece! Wonderful job, writing this :) -JWE
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Date: 6/5/2023 10:29:00 PM
Would you believe it has taken Harry's death to make me re-read some of my poems, he used to re-read and comment all the time, I was bad at that and missed out on some wonderful comments, thank you, JW xx
Date: 4/8/2018 7:38:00 PM
What a fantastic collaboration Mandy!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/5/2023 10:30:00 PM
Would you believe it has taken Harry's death to make me re-read some of my poems, he used to re-read and comment all the time, I was bad at that and missed out on some wonderful comments, thank you, Fj xx
Date: 1/24/2017 11:46:00 AM
Awwwww....this is lovely, you two. Sweet and romantic. Great collab. Thanks, Mandy, for visiting my blog. I appreciate it.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/5/2023 10:30:00 PM
Would you believe it has taken Harry's death to make me re-read some of my poems, he used to re-read and comment all the time, I was bad at that and missed out on some wonderful comments, thank you once again Eileen xx
Date: 6/9/2016 9:40:00 AM
When two talented people produce something, it usually has that extra in quality. This is a fine example.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/10/2016 3:05:00 AM
Hi and thanks Robert lovely comment xx
Date: 1/31/2016 7:29:00 PM
WOW, Lovely collaborations. Love SKAT
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/5/2023 10:31:00 PM
Would you believe it has taken Harry's death to make me re-read some of my poems, he used to re-read and comment all the time, I was bad at that and missed out on some wonderful comments, thank you, Skat xx
Date: 1/26/2016 11:39:00 AM
Again, you make a collab so easy, with your inspiring sentiment through words, that seem to spark a response,
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Date: 1/5/2016 11:22:00 AM
A very appreciable take on the story indeed, Mandy. Great rhythm and consistency.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/6/2016 3:18:00 AM
Thank you Micheal so happy you read it xx

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