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“this poem is not about what is written, but what is not written…” You bring me back to Life gently, with small doses Of light airy love, Like butterfly tugs. The gray nothing recedes to Blooming new color. Soon you’re my lover. With overwhelming passion You shatter the spell. I can feel myself Recovering with each touch, And primitive rush. 7/1/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/1/2013 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations Susan on your win....Donna
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Date: 3/31/2013 10:39:00 PM
Simply beautiful Susan, many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/31/2013 3:28:00 PM
Fantastic write, Susan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/31/2013 10:16:00 AM
Congrats, Sue. Excellent write. Well done. Great job. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:51:00 PM
Susan, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:08:00 PM
A modern Sleeping Beauty tale! A nice look "between the lines" here. Well done. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 7/18/2011 6:22:00 PM
Very romantic, I would have to say this is what most women dream of.
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Date: 7/10/2011 5:06:00 PM
Beautifully written and so well thought out. Very nicely done. Romantic. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:41:00 PM
I love it just as much seeing it again, Susan. Congrats on your win with this passionate poem.
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:39:00 PM
This is very romantic. Beautifully written and if you read between the lines you can see the tender patient love of someone healing a bruised soul. Did I get it right? God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:38:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on the placement....*_*junjun
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:30:00 PM
Beautiful free verse, Susan. Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:56:00 AM
I love it, Susan. Many congrats on your presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:20:00 PM
… swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, susan!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your wonderful win with this dynamic write my friend.. a super sensational piece of poetry luv..enjoy..
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:37:00 AM
I love this one, Susan. Many congrats : )
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations Susan on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:58:00 AM
Lovely, Susan. Best wishes in the contest. Lainie
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Date: 7/4/2011 3:24:00 PM
you may want to label it free verse Sue. Thanks for your nice comment Light & Love
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Date: 7/4/2011 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful tender write, Susan. My wife hasn't been too good - she needs an op - so I haven't been posting so much lately. Thanks for asking : )
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Date: 7/4/2011 6:21:00 AM
An excellent write here Susan.Best wishes.Thanks for your congratulatory message at my poem 'Raging winds'
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:17:00 AM
wow,susan, here is another one I REALLY like in this contest.Great job with the picture. it's gotta make the list!
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Date: 7/3/2011 11:15:00 AM
another winning material with gentle tones a-swaying, susan!! again, congrats on the wins..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:16:00 AM
Excellent entry that is a sure winner...always Michael
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