From Sepia To Blue

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Before you ~ I dreamed in sepia With you ~ my eyes opened to see blacks and whites Awake ~ vision sharpened into colors I never knew existed a look a hug a kiss more~ so much more ~ You offered me the gift of a kaleidoscope world Where ~ your laughter blew away the gray clouds and I saw a sky of blue your wink put the rosy blush in my pale cheeks your lips pressed mine into the magenta of fine wine your love turned my life into a kaleidoscope world ~ filled with wondrous new colors every day.

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/31/2015 5:44:00 AM

What a superb piece Lin! Sumptuous imagery and strong phrasing... '...your laughter blew away the gray clouds,' '...your wink put the rosy blush in my pale cheeks. BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith

Lin Lane
Date: 12/31/2015 5:59:00 AM

Many smiles your kind compliments bring to me, Keith. Thank you for them and for your well wishes. They are wished right back to you ;)

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 12/29/2015 12:01:00 PM

I fell in love with the words you used. Perfectly arranged into a great poem!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/29/2015 12:37:00 PM

You're very kind. Thank you.