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From Rainbow To Romance

Eyes so dark nesting the sky, stitching dreams on rainbow thread, candid love spilling over brings down my stare on to you. Eyes so deep mesmerized you, 'wonderful' your soft whisper, they can love without a touch turn your head,just look at me! © kash poet ============000============= Placement:1st; (June 2012) Contest:The crown of my body-A Whitney Sponsor:Nette Onclaud Date: 23 rd June 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2012 8:33:00 PM

Kash, this is a very nice and sweet win for Nette's contest.. xox~PD

Jane Kostman

Date: 7/2/2012 3:56:00 PM

Congrates on your win

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/29/2012 7:35:00 PM

Just love how you weave all of this together Kash; the words just melt into place and let me feelthe emotion> So special!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/29/2012 1:33:00 PM

beautiful indeed, Kash - so glad this was in first place

David Williams

Date: 6/29/2012 2:15:00 AM

kash, congrats on your win, excellent write..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2012 2:12:00 PM

YESSSSssssss!! (congrats)

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 6/28/2012 12:12:00 PM

Hey Kash, congrats on your win!...'nesting the sky'...I like that phrase!

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/27/2012 10:26:00 PM

awesome, congrats on your first place win Kash

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/27/2012 7:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kash. Love, Joyce

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/27/2012 6:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win Kash!! This one gave me chills. To my faves! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/27/2012 2:51:00 PM

Please refer to first comment! lol...U wrote a dandy of a poem Kashi! Artistic images of a rainbow love! You should be very proud. :) "the assistand" hahahh. gwendolen

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/27/2012 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning Poem Kash! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2012 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the Nette's contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2012 9:03:00 AM

Eyes wonderful choice..The eyes mirrow the soul..Enjoyed reading this passionate winning work..Thanks for stopping by...Finis means I have finished at least one task for the day..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2012 9:33:00 PM

Hey, Kash, just checking to see if you had a new poem yet. I need to get busy myself!!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/25/2012 2:54:00 PM

waiting can make the wanting sweeter! Light & Love

Susan Palli

Date: 6/25/2012 2:17:00 PM

could feel the emotions! well done

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2012 1:48:00 PM

I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Kash. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 6/25/2012 10:32:00 AM

beautiful write, Kash. Thanks for pointing out the error - oops, I totally misread the rhyming scheme, lol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2012 9:40:00 AM

where are you?? .. come visit, buddy!..:)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/24/2012 6:12:00 PM

A brilliant entry for Nette.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2012 5:07:00 PM

fascinating Kash from title to last line.. I simply luv rainbows.. and this poem projects them so well .. the eyes have it luv..best wishes

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/24/2012 2:45:00 PM

My comment is WAY DOWN AT THE BOTTOM!! :) :) :) smiley face parade!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2012 8:13:00 AM

sorry, Kashinath, you are correct. And you were very smart to choose eyes! I should have done the same! Your poem is a STANDOUT.

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/23/2012 8:19:00 PM

This is a beautiful, simply beautiful write my friend! I love how you desired for her to look into your eyes, to mesmerize her! Perfect 'crown of my body' entry Kash! Great Work!!