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From Noir To Blanche

From Noir to Blanche The lovely daisies closed my eyes I dreamt of angels in disguise Who walked upon my mortal land Dressed only in their black and gray The somber clothing very bland They gathered flowers as they passed Then tossed them in the summer air As they alit bright colors beamed The daisies turned my eyes to green Their clothing white to end the dream Photograph#1 Contest Sponsored by Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2016 9:12:00 PM

What a COOL dream this would be to have. And I see you got a win. I agree it should win. BIG congrats, my friend

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 4/21/2016 5:58:00 AM

This was beautifully vivid, I could envision those daisies being tossed in the air, turning her eyes green. Splendid write, congratulations!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/20/2016 2:03:00 PM

sweet congrats, sergi..i like the shift here!..huggs

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/20/2016 7:31:00 AM

Hi Mystic: Thank you for sharing my win.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/20/2016 7:20:00 AM

Hi Joseph: Thank you for comment. Much appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2016 3:11:00 PM

Very nicely penned Ralph...Congrats on your win

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/19/2016 1:39:00 PM

Thank you Richard.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2016 6:55:00 AM

I see this is a winner, not surprising Ralph it is very good. Congratulations.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/18/2016 10:27:00 PM

Dear Ralph Excellent piece, congrats on the win Ralph take care and keep these winners coming, I'll be here to read them all, cheri d.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2016 12:27:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2016 12:00:00 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 1:56:00 AM

Ralph, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~

Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/19/2016 1:41:00 PM

Hi Linda:Thank you very much, I am honored to hear from a sponsor. I will be sure to check your blog.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/17/2016 3:52:00 PM

Dear Ralph Nice piece excellent content, really a wonderful job my friend, and thanks for your awesome comments, cheri

Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/17/2016 5:15:00 PM

Hi Cherl: Thank you for your kind words. It's always god to hear from you.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2016 3:59:00 PM

It sounds like a beautiful dream Ralph:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/17/2016 5:16:00 PM

Hi Jan: THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND WORDS.