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From Birth To Hearse

From Birth to Hearse ‘Tis said that we are sinners - all before we ever rise - we fall. Is there no way to beat the curse that follows us - from birth - to hearse? For we are bathed in living’s dreams darkened halls with violet themes, the orange maw of changelings hue transfiguring through greens – to blue, windblown brushstroke-fashioned clouds move about in eerie shrouds opalescent shifting reds glistening through tartan threads. Witness, as in the timeless nest, the crimson golds of sunrise – set, cling to horizon’s blue-edged lie that colors – separate - the sky. Distorted by the muted browns the shifting dunes of opal gowns flowing in chimeral white across the darkened stage - of sight. ‘Tis said we are and will be dust colors changed by living’s touch, beauty that reversed the curse that follows us - from birth – to hearse. 8/1/2014 For Charlotte Puddifoot Vibrant Verse 2 poetry contest

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Date: 8/24/2014 11:41:00 AM
John:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:41:00 PM
Loved it John, congrats on such a vibrant verse
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John Lawless
Date: 8/9/2014 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Mark.
Date: 8/7/2014 8:08:00 PM
Back again to say congratulations, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/9/2014 7:40:00 AM
Thanks again Faye
Date: 8/7/2014 6:40:00 AM
Amazing poem.... Linda
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2014 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, PD
Date: 8/7/2014 6:15:00 AM
I rarely place poems that contain archaisms such as 'tis', but I simply had to place this one for its vibrant images and beautiful use of colour! I liked the profound theme, too...not even the 'tis' could detract from the beauty of this poem (though I'd prefer 'it is'!) I like your work very much - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2014 7:20:00 AM
Charlotte, I thought "archaisms" were covered under the "poetic license" clause.
Date: 8/2/2014 9:42:00 PM
my goodness, this one just got better and better as I read it. It has many cool images and great colorful words. You took an idea and brushed that paint all over it. Hope to see you on the winners' list.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2014 7:27:00 AM
Andrea, made the list. Thank you for you support and kind words.
Date: 8/2/2014 11:49:00 AM
Incredible imagery in this poignant write and i love the clever rhyming. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2014 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Jan.
Date: 8/2/2014 10:17:00 AM
John, glad I can be the first to comment on this wonderful poem. I know many comments will follow mine. So beautifully you take us on life's journey; I feel the yearning of our souls eloquently expressed.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Faye, for your encouragement and kind words.

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