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From a Distance

From a distance what I saw in a Down Syndrome child was a human in the raw— forgettable, lamentable, wild. My prejudice was abhorrent dismissing a "different" being. Disdain came in a torrent driven by cold-eyed seeing. Then came a close-up look at a new grandson in my arms. My bias I forthwith forsook lost in his extra-gene charms. Almond-shaped eyes, short fingers flat nose—those one observes. But the trait that ever lingers is a smile an angel deserves. The sight remodels the mind, assures that nothing is awry. Anything like it you won't find regardless of how hard you try. From a distance what we see is often not what we suppose. The virtues of human intimacy universal truths ultimately disclose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/28/2014 12:32:00 PM
- I have worked with Down Syndrome children - Most people do not know that much of this syndrome - Ignorance makes distance - No one is more open, honest and loving ..... give them a place in your heart - Really glad that I read your poem today Paul !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2014 2:54:00 PM
- Yes, I know this statistic of around 90% ..... ultrasound is great, but not always - // Anne-Lise :)
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/28/2014 2:47:00 PM
Anne Lise, A well-placed source told me that world-wide 90% of DS babies are aborted. Apparently, as soon as their parents learn (via ultrasound) their child will be DS, they have it destroyed. We have found what you write to be true—they truly are "open, honest, and loving." It's a blessing to have such a child. Thank you for your kind words of wisdom.
Date: 10/28/2014 10:17:00 AM
outstanding piece of writing paul excellent picture you drew
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/28/2014 2:51:00 PM
Liam, I regard supportive words from you as a treasure. I'm immediately gratified when I see your photo on the comment section that relates to one of my poems. I can't thank you enough. God bless, ever and always.
Date: 10/28/2014 10:06:00 AM
I'm happy you wrote this Paul. It helps people understand Down Syndrome children better. They have an inner beauty that far surpasses any outer beauty. They love unconditionally and the biggest thing special about them is that they are more special than any of us. I was blessed to spend much time with a Down Syndrome child and I'll never forgot that special twinkle in his eyes.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/28/2014 2:57:00 PM
Brenda, What you write is "smack on." DS children DO have an "inner beauty that far surpasses any outer beauty," and they are, indeed, "more special than any of us." Thank you for writing— thank you, thank you!
Date: 10/27/2014 10:43:00 PM
Perfect sentiment spoken honestly, I really appreciate words written this way. So true about the angel smile. Good poem, Paul
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/27/2014 11:27:00 PM
Dan, Thank you! Your encouraging words are valued and appreciated. I hope all is well with you and your loved ones. God bless.

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