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Frog On a Lily Pad

He croaks as he waits Calling for love from his pad She answers the call Rockman :-) For the Haiku: Lily-pads And Frogs by Sidney LeeAnn

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Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 5/10/2013 12:26:00 AM

nice image....

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/29/2012 12:59:00 AM

cute ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2012 5:58:00 PM

THis is so cute!!

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 6/14/2012 1:11:00 AM

A unique thought .thank you for sharing .jk

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/15/2012 9:53:00 AM

I heard them in my son's pond doing exactly as you say and they sound like banjo strings. Ah romance, sweet as it is, froggie love defies the imagination.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/11/2012 1:31:00 PM

Oooh, frog romance going on here. Heehee. Very nice haiku! Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2012 1:07:00 PM

Wish you luck in contest Rockman - Sweet haiku, love it. - Have a nice weekend to you. - oxox hug Anne-Lise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2012 4:03:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed ...Sara

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/7/2012 3:31:00 PM

this is really good, especially for someone who "doesn't really do haikus." i like it!

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/7/2012 1:43:00 PM

Wonderful write Randy!! Well Done! I hope you enter and best wishes in the contest! big hugs, love deb

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/7/2012 5:12:00 AM

excellent this is Rockman, if for the contest, good luck should do well.harry

Amy Green

Date: 5/7/2012 4:35:00 AM

Nice Haiku much enjoyed

Kash Poet

Date: 5/7/2012 3:21:00 AM

Good one.Best wishes.