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oh hello- my name is frigidair and I am a (retro) refrigerator for food I have been in this apartment since 1950 a nice kitchen but I cannot move so not sure about the rest I am tall as a person and a bit fat a lovely creamy white with drawers (and an egg compartment) and of course a freezer I am restored a restoration not quit an antique yet but feeling my age my father was general electric and mother was pink my sister was turquoise free standing happily I hum all day and all night and sometimes I clunk I look crooked but that's the floor I seem to be going downhill inside me are good things like meat and poultry ice cream milk eggs vegetables juice fruit please be careful with my door oh some of my shelves are lopsided (well that's old age) and lets not talk about the cracks but I still work and some say I am quite appealing I've aged well in this heritage building or at least that is what I heard (and the word vintage) did I tell you they restored me to be frost free (they put me to sleep for that) the girl likes that about me I like it when she caresses me with a wet damp clothe she is quite proud of me and I like this room big and roomy and the window looks out on a lovely garden that's so nice and the little things the girl has on counters so pretty (she is) she always puts some flowers by the sink for me oh how sweet its really a good life for a refrigerator although not sure how much time I have left (no regrets) and to all refrigerators let me say keep cool and plugged in __________________________ September 10, 2015 Free Verse Personification For the contest, A Tribute To Major Appliances Honorable Mention

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Date: 10/13/2015 1:06:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write broken!
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Date: 10/10/2015 12:07:00 PM
Another sweet win... SKAT
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Date: 10/9/2015 5:31:00 PM
Broken Wing, congratulations on your win!!! Enjoyed reading
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Date: 10/9/2015 3:00:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Broken. Loved reading it again! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/9/2015 10:56:00 AM
Your memories are so subtle in this that by letting the refrigerator speak for you, it gives a great picture of the way things were. Great job and congratulations on the win.
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Date: 10/9/2015 10:07:00 AM
Such great personalization, Constance !! I loved your take on this challenge. So cute!!
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Date: 10/9/2015 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations - well done ... CayCay
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Date: 10/9/2015 4:57:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:15:00 PM
I'm a bit jealous Constance...I'm probably somewhere close to her age and nobody calls ME 'vintage' (Just old fool) AND nobody's 'restored' me yet either (I wanna be frost free too) LOVE the part about having to put her to sleep...Hilarious!! You got a winner here - Tim
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Date: 9/13/2015 6:19:00 PM
amazing personification poem, Constance. Simply beautiful. Let's hope she goes another 50 more years!!
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Date: 9/12/2015 8:48:00 AM
I love those old refrigerators. You did this so well. I expect this will do very well in the contest Constance.
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:56:00 AM
I certainly recall that exact fridge dear poet, and to bring it to life was insanely creative! Thanx for the memories Constance...much love, james
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Date: 9/10/2015 6:40:00 PM
A great write you painted BW. I love the flow of your piece it is extreme excellence and beautiful.......love.......A.M.
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Date: 9/10/2015 5:15:00 PM
Very clever personification Broken Wings - we both have the same idea of being caressed with a cloth lol great minds think alike :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2015 3:39:00 PM
love this clever write, my friend. Hope you & the kitties are doing well x
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Date: 9/10/2015 8:14:00 AM
This is great, Broken! I love the personification of the retro refrig! We have a 1940's Philco in our bar that is still working and in great condition. It's a conversation piece for sure! Good luck in the contest -- I am sure this will do really well. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/10/2015 7:43:00 AM
Interesting take on a not-so-interesting theme. I like it.
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Date: 9/10/2015 2:12:00 AM
Brilliant take on the theme with this very lovely personification write broken! Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/10/2015 1:11:00 AM
Loved your personifications. Witty write. Really enjoyed.
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Date: 9/10/2015 12:10:00 AM
Another beautiful personification...all the best in the contest Broken wings!
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