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Friction Builds Up Sense

Magnet transmits strength Iron bar remains touched friction builds up sense

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2012 3:56:00 PM
you put much thought in this haiku...love it..pd
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Date: 1/8/2012 7:34:00 PM
steps of ultimate creativity bl.. always enjoy your design of words and wisdom to present.. thankxx for warm welcome comments..my friend ..
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:43:00 AM
Hi, BL, good to see you here with more new poetry. I am having computer problems but will try to see you when I can. I appreciate your kindness always. Andrea
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Date: 1/8/2012 7:28:00 AM
Interesting Haiku..Can the magnet be transfered or the strength?..Sara
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:12:00 AM
Strength here means energy.
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:07:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, my friend. I mean Iron bar receives the magnetic power from the magnet by friction keeping in touch for few days. Like this our sense also develops inner. I think in this way, my lovely friend. bl

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