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Freya's Fate

Four Line Contest Sponsor: Silent One Apologies, SAY IT WITH FLOWERS, then WE FLIRT SO THIS WAY, turning into hours. We acknowledge each other's faults, our shortcomings and failings, Our pure desire for each other's significance becomes a true unveiling. Forgiveness flowing frantically, Freya's fate is flirting fantastically. ~Date Written: December 16, 2015~

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:07:00 AM

Brilliant take Laura n a great win.. big congrats!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 9:14:00 AM

Always a pleasure to come back with congratulations, Laura! Well done!:) // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 12/21/2015 10:31:00 AM

Many thanks again Paul!! *smiles*

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/21/2015 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations on winning in this contest. Creatively written.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/21/2015 10:31:00 AM

Thank you Susan for your kind words! *smiles*

Michael Tor

Date: 12/21/2015 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations Laura a fine win my Dear!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/21/2015 10:30:00 AM

Thank you Michael! be blessed *smiles*

John Hamilton

Date: 12/20/2015 10:15:00 PM

Loved it! especially the anagram very clever! Well deserved win! You are on a roll!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/21/2015 10:29:00 AM

Many thanks John! Have a great day :) *smiles*

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/20/2015 8:34:00 PM

Very beautifully done, Laura. Congratulations on your nice placement! Hgus, Sandra

Lu Loo
Date: 12/21/2015 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Sandra :)*smiles*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 7:28:00 PM

yes, another one I remember seeing. Big congrats for your win, sweet Laura Loo!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2015 7:55:00 PM

Thanks again Andrea :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 4:47:00 PM

laura, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:28:00 AM

LAURA, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2015 12:20:00 PM

Thank you:)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/19/2015 8:01:00 AM

You did a very good job with this one, Laura. I have gone in for this challenge, and I know that it is not at all easy to do! ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 12/19/2015 12:41:00 PM

Many thanks again Paul :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2015 3:36:00 PM

Oh I must post mine now - hate to post more than one poem but reads and comments are at a premium:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 12/17/2015 5:27:00 PM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2015 6:42:00 PM

cool. I bet you started with the alliteration to come up with this. Anyway,I would do it that way. Gotta get moving on this one. I bet it will fill fast!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2015 9:06:00 PM

I started with the anagram, then the whole "forgiveness" theme followed it...I finally wrote something different for a change... Many thanks :)